Presentation Feedback

The feedback we got after the presentation was:

• Needed to zoom in more on the seals in the first scene.
• It was difficult to tell where each scene was.
• The animation did not include the visit essex website.
• The dinner table at the end could do with being less sparce.
• The music had a sad feeling to it.

To improve these on these points text was added in Premiere Pro by Chrissie saying where each scene was and also adding the website at the end. Roman redid the last scene adding more objects to the table. Sally found new music to go with the piece and Tracy altered the first scene's camera to show the seals more close up.